All at once, Zeph was free of the supernatural restraints that had held him. He bolted off the bed and whipped into the elements, already flying, already tracking.
Ella!
His soul screamed to the heavens, thunder rumbling across the night sky in a low, eerie lament. Some part of his consciousness sensed Chrysander's summons, but he couldn't stop, couldn't think about anything other than his beloved.
She was dying.
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Laura
20 comments:
Heartwrenching and intriguing! Great 6 Laura!
How very sweet and sad at the same time.
Intensely romantic and sad!
Oh no!
Very intense!
Excellent choice for today's Six.
No! Dramatically lovely, it just pulls at you. Very nice.
This scene has to be one the most heartbreaking ones I've read in a while. Such a fantastic book! Fab six, Laura!
Lovely description. You can really feel Zeph's fear and urgency. Great snippet :)
This scene seems very sad, pulled me in right away. Great six! loved it.
The desperate and heartwrenching. Loved the six!
Powerful six. The description is excellent, yet so sweet and sad, all at the same time.
Very powerful and emotional. This snippet has great "movement."
Great job juxtaposing the intensity of his emotions against the weather. Thanks for sharing!
Poignant.
That is some powerful feeling there. Very hero-worthy!
Fantastic six. So heartwrenching.
Oh my... the romance here! So intense! Great six!
Dara
Whoa! This is powerful. Awesome job!
Great 6!
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