As his flesh joined with hers, Zeph's soul sung, his psyche eased. When he was seated all the way in her, he paused, savored. He’d had his share of partners, but this felt different, full of some unnamed promise. Perhaps it was his healing energy within her, or Ella's own special calming aura surrounding him. Perhaps it was her honesty and forthrightness—so different from the way his divine brethren behaved. Good gods, he wasn’t sure who was claiming who here.
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21 comments:
Love this six! Congrats on the great review, Laura! :)
So well written! Who is claiming who?????
Love the line about his uncertainty as to who was claiming who.
His honesty in the moment is fab and so touching. Congrats on the review :D
Ooh, love that last line. Great snippet, Laura!
So men CAN multi-task! teehee
Oh good grief, that was beautiful! Love the verbs - "seated" "eased" an the last sentence is pure gold.
Very good choice of words to convey whats going through his head...and body. Congrats on the review as well. 4 stars? Nice.
Love his vulnerability. Terrific, very sexy six.
Great six. I love the thought process.
Aww, I love Zeph. :-)
Oh I love this: Who is claiming who here. I love an Alpha male who can feel vulnerable, too.
Great six, very touching.
I just love it! This is the best -
he paused, savored
Just plain WOW!
Love the internalization here. Fantastic!
Beautifully done. Just awesome!
WOW! Just beautiful-especially the last line.
Love the delightful confusion he's feeling - terrific excerpt! Great news about the wonderful review too!
I got tingles on that first line, I swear!
Thanks for all the awesome comments, guys!
This is such a great six! Beautiful wording! As always, can't wait to read more!
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