He would’ve been impressed with her responsiveness if he hadn’t been so completely enthralled by those eyes. Her left iris was a brilliant emerald, nearly rivaling his own in the intensity and clarity of green. Her right, however, was a bright turquoise, touched by green to be sure, but without question a deep, dazzling blue. The effect of her mismatched gaze, paired as it was with her fair, creamy skin and dark tresses, was arresting.
Powerless to resist, he leaned down and cupped her left cheek in his hand, his thumb stroking across her cheekbone and playing with the ends of her eyelashes. “You have been touched by magic.”
Isn't she beautiful? Shayla's hair is actually midnight black in my story, but I couldn't resist this woman! LOL
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Laura
31 comments:
Ooh, how interesting. I've only ever met one person with mismatched eyes in real life, and I admit it was both disconcerting and beautiful.
Ooh, interesting, Amber! Thanks for kicking off the comments!
Very sweet and sensual! :)
So sensual it gives me shivers. Gotta read this one.
Very nice! Love the wonder he feels toward her! And great pic, btw!
Amy Durham
Nice twist! Wonderful description.
wow. very sexy scene
Wow, her eyes are gorgeous, both in the picture and the description.
Wow, now that is sexy!
Oh sexy. You love mis matched eyes - but so do I! LOL
Great description of her eyes (and great picture too)
I had a friend once with a one brown eye and one green eye. It was really cool. Never told her she was touched by magic (I think I was 12 when I knew her), but I always thought it was so neat.
Love this six! Can't wait to read it!
beautiful. thanks for this one Laura
What a great Six. I've known three guys with mismatched eyes. I even dated one of them. They all had a blue eye and an eye with a shade of brown. I've never seen a female with mismatched eyes and I've never seen a blue and green combo.
I love this description!
Very vivid description! loved it!
I love it! And the picture is fantastic.
My boyfriend in High School had mismatched eyes. One green with a small brown speck in it and the other solid brown.
Very interesting. Wonder what other effects her brush with magic has had on her.
My roommate in college had mismatched eyes!
Oh Nice!
Love that last line! What tension in this scene, loved it. Great six!
That would be very arresting! Nice post!
What a fascinating description. Yes, "touched by magic."
Love your six!
Oh, my word. This may be my favorite I've read so far today. Very nice!
I can't believe how many of you have met someone with mismatched eyes! I've never known anyone with them!
Thanks for all the great feedback today, guys! :)
She sounds stunning. Well done!
The picture of the model with those gorgeous eyes made your description all the more dramatic. I could see why your MC was having so much trouble :)
Fantastic six!
Wow. I love how you've managed to say so much with your six without making your sentences too wordy. And the prose and picture are both stunning. :D
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