Sunday, April 10, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #9!

Welcome back for my ninth installment of the ever-entertaining Six Sentence Sunday!  I so enjoy the chance to learn more about all the participants' stories, and I'm always very excited for folks to drop by and partake in a little of my own.  In celebration of finishing several rounds of edits and beginning querying SNOW'S MAN, my paranormal romance with a Christmas theme, I thought we'd stick with another six from this story.  [STORY SOLD; EXCERPT DELETED AT PUBLISHER REQUEST!]

Little does she know who this stranger is, who sent him, or why he's there.  Dun dun DUN!

As always, take the time to read the other Sixers' posts.  It's always great fun!  And follow the #sixsunday hashtag on Twitter!

Thanks for reading and commenting [hint hint :)],
Laura


26 comments:

Marie Dees said...

Interesting six and situation. I can really feel her focus on getting that shirt off him.

Rebecca Royce said...

Very, very well written. I want to keep reading!

Kathleen Grieve said...

This is very intense for her! The suspense is killing me! LOL

Cate Masters said...

Great setup! Makes me want to read more. :)

Sandra Sookoo said...

Such spirit! Great job!

Sarah Grimm said...

Great six, Laura! Absolutely love the line 'if he was going to hurt her, kill her...'

Eleri Stone said...

Who is he? Great six!

Claire Robyns said...

Brilliant, very punch sentences

Jayel Kaye said...

love the situation and want to know much more

Linda Morris, Romance writer said...

Suspenseful six!

naelany said...

oh my! She's got spunk, that one ;-)

Lindsay said...

Bet she ends up ripping the shirt of for another reason. Great set up.

Jessica Subject said...

Great six! I can really sense her determination. The pacing is good too.

Jay Di Meo said...

Yeah, get it off him! :-) That;s always a good thing.

Laura Kaye said...

Thanks everybody! Some of you are quite naughty though! ;)

D L Jackson said...

Love this. Strip your killed before he does you in.
Great six.
Thanks for sharing.

Cara Bristol said...

"If he was going to hurt her, kill her, he wasn’t going to do it wearing her dead husband’s clothing"...funny. What a unique way to get him naked!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Agree with Cara: great line and great way to get him naked!

(Reverse bodice ripper!)

Lauri J Owen said...

I can feel her anger at him. great job!

laynap said...

I love the intensity here. Great six, Laura!

Laura Kaye said...

Thanks everyone! Can't wait until you learn why he's wearing her dead husband's shirt in the first place! hehe

graylinfox said...

Intense and well written!

Lynne Murray said...

Powerful and intriguing, so many questions even aside from who is he and why is he there. How did he put on her husband's shirt and what happens when she rips it off? Great intensity and suspense!

Hailey Edwards said...

Very tense. Curious to see how this plays out.

Pippa Jay said...

Male bodice ripping, lol!

Laura Kaye said...

Yes, Pippa! Thanks for stopping by everybody!