From my upcoming paranormal, Forever Freed, once again. This week, it's short and...sweet?
“God, Lucien,” she murmured around the edge of a kiss.
The sound of my name out of her mouth in this moment was fascinating, particularly joined as it was by the rich smell of her arousal. Mine. I groaned at the thought and the feeling. Needing this so damn bad, I pulled her harder against me and settled us back against the car. Her body fell between my legs, and I ground my length against her stomach. My desire for her went from “I should stop this” to nuclear in seconds.
Ain't he a cutey? He could grind us into a car any day! LOL (Come back next week and I'll show you his abs--promise!)
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If you'd like a little more Lucien and Samantha, scroll down to 2/14 and read the special Valentine's excerpt I posted of their first kiss!
Thanks for reading,
Laura
34 comments:
Great excerpt! I love the internal thoughts, especially the last line.
Very hot! xx
Yum. Love this snippet!
That last internal thought is awesome.
I love this snippet. His internal thoughts are great. I can't wait to read about his abs next week!
Ooh, loved the "..around the edge of a kiss."
Wow, hot and sexy!
I like being in his POV and hearing/seeing/feeling his emotions as they unfold. Well done!
Should stop...but I doubt he will! LOL!
Thanks everybody! Loving the reactions and feedback! And, Stacey, not quite yet! ;)
Great last line: " from 'I should stop this' to nuclear in seconds" !!
sizzling, and brought to climax perfectly by the nuclear last line.
I absolutely love that last line!
Agreeing with everyone else, the last line really set off your excerpt.
Going nuclear. I love that! It's always fun being in the male POV. Love his how his desire seems to escalate beyond his control.
Also loved reading your Valentine's Day excerpt. Oh la la! That sizzled!
Can you say sexy?
Okay, you don't need to actually say it since you showed it so well.
Great Job. Great Six.
Go, Lucien! :-) Nice snippet!
So much to like here. I want more.
*clears throat* I think I need a few things. Time. Money. And More! ;-) Love it
That is a HOT snippet. Loved it!
Love the last line. Nice 6
Very hot, loved it.
Whoa. Smokin!
Oh yeah - sweet is is! ;-p
Oh my, oh my, oh my. I love a good hero's POV scene. :D
He's a cutey, and that certainly was a steamy six.
Cool post. :)
Great hot transition to nuclear six!
Love all his internal thoughts. Great voice.
That is a great last line!
Thanks for stopping by and commenting everyone! Six sentence Sunday is so much fun and I'm pleased to get to know y'all and your writing better! :)
Cute!
Love men with dark hair. Love the name Lucien. And, imagine that, loved the excerpt!
Y'all are so awesome! Can't wait for this Sunday! Do we want more Lucien?
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