Welcome back for more six-sentence fun! So, let's see what Forever Freed's Lucien and Samantha are up to this week...
She leaned forward and kissed my wet chest, her tongue just meeting my flesh as she drank a droplet of water into her mouth. I closed my eyes at the dragging sensation. Her drinking off me was too fucking close to the fantasy of her drinking from me, and all at once the blood turned molten in my veins.
Oblivious to the seismic activity building under my skin, she kissed and licked across my chest. I wrapped a steadying arm around her waist, the heat of her lust searing me. Dio, I burned from the inside and the out.
<--LUCIEN'S LICKABLE ABS!!!!!!
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See ya next week! Thanks for reading,
Laura
47 comments:
Yum! Love those lickable abs. AND the very hot six!
~Sarah
www.sarahgrimm.com
Such powerful tension in only six sentences!
The tie from lapping water to drinking from him is lovely. Even more lovely is the show of one hot guy.
excellent... Reow! :D <3
Very hot snippet!
Great snippet. Who wouldn't want to lick water off those abs?
I now need a cold shower. Well done!
Very hot! Good job!
HOT! Yummy lickable abs.
Whew! Very hot six. And hot pic too!
Those are definitely very lickable abs. And a VERY hot excerpt!
Well now. That was yummy. Nice and hot and all from his point of view.
*drools* That is all! :)
Jesus... *clears throat*
Hubba Hugga Yum! Love the imagery this conjures!
Ooh. This is very sexy.
WOW- what a way to enjoy a Sunday morning- love it and continue on- drinking, licking, juicy, wet... ok- now I need s cold shower
Wonderful internal conflict with his desire wanting her to drink from inside him.
Love love that last line!
I'd lick the hell out of him. LOL
very hot six, and I love the seismic activity comment!
Wow, very hot and intense! Great six!
Loved the description of 'seismic activity building under my skin.' Nice pic too. :)
Great six, happy anniversary Laura.
You use description well. Great six!
Lickable is right. *Yum*
Loved the snippet. The drinking off, when he wants her to drink from him is a great, great line.
Well done, as usual.
Happy Sunday everybody! Thanks for all the wonderful comments! I so enjoy reading each and every one!
Those are some very lickable abs. I love when he says "dragging sensation". Wonderful description. It just pulls me right in.
He is seriously sexy.
Now he is a ** hawtty ** licks lips ..... Lucian is luscious !!! great snippet cant wait to get my hands on him ** oops the book I mean ** lusty wink !!!
kat
kittee_cat@bigpond.com
Very sexy six, and I'd lick him! Yummy :)
Hello deliciousness! Loved your description, the use of seismic was awesome imagery.
I like those six! Sounds sexy!!
Mmmm those abs! Yummy! I can't wait to read more.
Powerfully sexy!
Whew! Seriously steamy. :)
Very steamy. I love the description of molten blood.
Whew! *fans self* Lickable abs are lickable! What an inticing read! ♥
Yummo! Those are very lickable abs.
oh so lickable....
Oh man...lickable abs and a tall drink of hot six! Love it. :)
Mmmm I love a man with lickable abs!!! so very hot! hot! hot!!
xx
Angela
http://angelasstone.livejournal.com
Oh, very hot. Curious about your PB - who is he? (A little young for my tastes, but still...)
@Misa--the guy is the cover model for my book--don't know his name, unfortunately! ;)
Thanks everybody!
Ooh la la. An excellent six-sentence selection! And a photo too...
Mmm... saucy six! Lovely pic too ;)
Very hot and yeah, very lickable ;)
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